So I wrote this as a sophomore last year (junior now). Basically I wrote about how my hunger made me all greedy at a sushi buffet, and how that taught me a lesson to NOT be greedy over food (or anything really).
is this topic awkward? or not strong? I think it is..BUT i'm not too sure.
My english teacher last year read it over and scored an 8.5/10.
But you see, my english teacher was extremely easy. So I can't completely trust her...haha....
what do you think! please help me!